Tag: writing year 4

For The Birds

Task Description: Today my group finished the birds task we have been working on this for the whole week. This was a story about some birds and a big bird.

 

Narrator it was a sunny day and the birds were sitting on the    power line

 Samax:(sitting on the power line talking)

Jaxon:(sitting on a power line being angry)

Ruby:(staring at the big bird)

Max: (flew and landed on the power line with the other birds and started waving)

Max: Hello

All The birds:(moving further from the big bird)

Max:(The big bird flew into the center of the little birds and the power line went down)  Why are you guys moving away from me?

All The birds WE DON’T LIKE YOU

Max: ( Turning upside down) 

Samax: (accidentally hit max foot and looks at the other bird next to him jaxon and gave an evil face and starts hitting his toes)

All the other birds: (cheering) Fall off  the line..

Ruby: realizes that it is down to one toe and tells everyone to look and they all flew into the sky and came down with no feathers .

 

Will He Save Her

There once was a man named spider man and a woman called wonder women. They were walking the streets until they saw an evil villain. The villain was called venom. Venom was trapping people then he ran off. Venom was running as fast as a lightning bolt. He went on top of a train spiderman and Wonder women couldn’t keep up but they just kept going. When they got on the train they went to Venom. They got off the train and followed Venom to a house they went in and saw that he caught heaps of people. Spiderman helped all the people out and Wonder Women stayed inside and made sure that there wasn’t anyone left inside. Venom saw Wonder women and got her to go to the roof but she didn’t want to but then she suddenly fell asleep then Venom got her up very high up on the roof of a glass building. Spiderman saw her from the ground so he used the elevator to get up

quikly when he got up Wonder woman woke up Venom quickly dropped Wonder women off one off the sides of the building. Spider Man jumped down to save her and he got her and landed safely. Then Venom fell asleep magically and then they had to quickly bring him to a super secure jail cell then when Venom woke up he was so mad that he got caught catching innocent people he was so mad that he nearly broke the door. Then he broke out and the two superheroes had to catch him again. They chased him so fast they nearly caught him but when he went to a building they  found  the correct  building after a little while. They locked him in an underground super secure jail cell.